I'm posting the
*ROUGH DRAFT*
of my manga on here.

I'm not good at taking "critiques" unless you're a better artist then me, but I'm open to "suggestions".

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Suggestions:
*Something I can add that might make it better.
*Something I can delete that might make it better.
*Something I can do to make inking better.
*Perspectives I could use in a panel (since it's a rough draft i'm lazy and don't think up many different ones XD; )
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What NOT to suggest:
*Using rulers (i'm not stupid and i'll use them later LOL)
*Using screentones (i'm planning to when i get a program for it)
*Using color or shading (not my style)
*Turning it into a different genre (if you don't like the humor, don't read it! XP )